CRITIQUES: Who Should You Ask For One?

Critiques are important because they will tell you if your story is interesting, holds the reader’s attention, where potential problems and mistakes are, and helps you get ready for submission (first time or otherwise) to agents or editors.

If it’s your mom, best friend or some relative that is not in any way, shape, or form in the writing business, is probably not the best person to provide you with constructive criticism. Even if they are avid readers, the types of comments you may receive from them might be something like: “That’s funny; I love your characters; and my favorite, “great!”

Those types of comments are fine, once your book is published. In fact, those types of comments from readers are golden. But they are not so helpful on the road to getting published. It’s not to say that you should not have your friends and relatives read your book. You just need to understand that the comments you may receive might not be what you need to hear to
progress on the writing path.

I recently started a new book, a Victorian Romance , that I am having a great deal of fun “pantsing” my way through. After completing a few chapters, I sent it out to various channels for critiques. Here are the types of critiques I typically look for:

1)      Chapter Contests – whether they are RWA affiliated chapters or not, sending your manuscript to the right contests allows you to receive 2 to 3 critiques of your work for a nominal fee. Who knows, if your first few chapters are strong enough, it could final and be sent to the final judge in your category, who may be an agent or editor that might want to represent you in the future!

2)      Writing Buddies – These can be published or unpublished friends or chapter-mates. What I have found is that I have at least 3 critique partners (if not more) because when you receive comments back, you’ll notice that each person will pick-up on different things.

I have one person that notices the legal aspects (such as that rule didn’t exist in that time), another that checks grammar and punctuation, another that focuses on characterization, and even another one that focuses on plotting and pacing. (NOTE: I didn’t ask them to look for these things specifically, it’s just what I noticed that they are really good at.)

If you are able to find all these aspects in one critique partner, considered yourself extremely blessed. Just be sure to devote time to critique their work honestly and with constructive comments as well. Notice how “Critique Partner?” It’s definitely meant to be a 2-way street.

3)      Paid Critique – (I haven’t done this yet with my current WIP, but will further down the line.) You can find these a number of different ways, through chapter bulletins or newsletters, on published author or agency websites, via Twitter, Facebook, or RSS Feeds. Heck, you can even solicit your favorite NY Times Best Selling Author to ask for a critique,  and tell him/her that you’re willing to donate their fee to the chapter/cause/charity of their chose. You will never know what you’ll find until you “Google it.” I have even found one listed on eBay for a chapter fundraiser.

These Paid critiques are great if you have the extra cash, because you will get an unbiased review of your work from someone that’s been in the business for a while and will be bent on making sure that you get your money’s worth.

12 Life Lessons from Jane Austen

Thought you all might enjoy this article from the Huffington Post. Best part is that it’s written by a gentleman. I love it when guys can appreciate items out of their normal realm. http://tinyurl.com/3uutcku

My favorites:
Slide #6: Forget Botox. Staying young means continuing to be open to the possibility that life can take you by surprise. Curiosity is the true source of joy. If you think you’ve already seen it all, you have.

Slide #11: Lust at first sight, a whole train of fantasies and projections at first sight–sure. But to love someone, you have to get to know their character, not just their body, and that takes time. True love sneaks up on you. You never see it coming until it’s already there.

Jane Austen

May RWA Chapter Contest Deadlines

There’s still some time to get in on these contests if your entry is already polished and ready to go. Writing contests are a great way to get some feedback on your WIP.

The KEY:

EA = Electronic Format Available
EA/Non US = Electronic for Foreign Entries
EO = Electronic Only
MO = Members Only
U = Unpublished
P = Published 
P/3 = Not published in three years
Pnr = Published, but not by RWA standards
PC = Not published in category selected

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The Lories Best Published (P)
From the Heart
Postmarked by May 9, 2011 (extended)
Copyright of 2010
http://fthrw.com/contest/index.php
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The Molly Contest (EO)
Heart of Denver Romance Writers
Received by May 15, 2011
First thirty pages (max) + five page (max) synopsis
http://www.hodrw.com/contests/the-2010-molly-unpublished-writer-contest/
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Ignite the Flame
Central Ohio Fiction Writers
Postmarked by May 16, 2011 or Emailed by same date.
Entries should be 15 pages MAX, with an optional one-page, un-judged, set-up. (No synopsis) Entries should be the first meet or first reunion meeting of your hero and heroine.
http://www.cofw.org/contest.html
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Weta Nichols Writing Contest (U – EO)
Ozark Romance Authors
Received by May 16, 2011
First ten pages.
http://www.ozarksromanceauthors.com/
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Emerald City Opener
Greater Seattle RWA
Received by Midnight – May 31, 2011
First seven pages.
http://gsrwa.org/contest.php
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Blog Side Note, I’ve submitted to this contest. They have GREAT feedback and it allows you to focus on really grabbing the attention of the reader.)

This information was gathered and pulled from an article written by Donna Caubarreaux. Donna Caubarreaux is a member of Coeur de Louisiane, Scriptscene Chapter, NOLA Stars, Heart of Louisiana, and Kiss of Death. She received a RWA Service Award in 1997.


My first blog entry! Newbie Alert…

Just like with my writing, I am “pants-ing” my way through my first blog. I found a great quote that really goes along with that mentality.

“Writing a novel is like driving a car at night. You can only see as far as your headlights. But you can make the whole trip that way.” E.L. Doctorow

I’m not sure how many of you out there are plotters versus pantsers with regard to writing, but that quote made me feel just a little bit better.

The reason why I even need this type of affirmation is because as a writer, the natural question that people ask me is: What’s your book about?”

“Uh, well . . .it’s about …”

I have the gist of it, but they are really just tent poles of ideas for major plot points. And my characters seem to take over from there. I’m thinking that there might be others like me out there. If so, please let me know!